Early Mourning

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by HauntedReverie (doing the bad mango) on Monday, 09-Jan-2006 18:34:39

This is a song my internet lover in Illinois wrote for me. I find it slightly disturbing, but sweet and heart felt. this is exactly how he wrote it, I didn't correct the grammar. Hope yall like.

Its 3:04 on my clock
the sun is still resting
my mind is restless and
I long for my world of dreams
where you wait for me forever.
I'm staring at the ceiling
counting the spiders as they
crawl across, hunting for blood.

It's 3:17 in my house
my flashlights batteries are tired
my pen is inkless, so I'm writing
with the blood fresh from my wrists.
the thought of you keeps my blood
flowing into these words.
I'm staring out the window
looking for light, but I only
see darkness, shadows of demons.

I think time froze, maybe
my mind is falling apart
all I have is you so don't
leave me in the shadows of doubt
the moon is fading into the night
either its daylight or the darkness has
won. where are you? I'm so scared.
my angel of light, where are you?

Post 2 by laced-unlaced (Account disabled) on Tuesday, 10-Jan-2006 5:15:59

i like it. thanks for posting

Post 3 by Perestroika (Her Swissness) on Tuesday, 10-Jan-2006 6:31:29

a little disturbing, but on the whole pleasing and heart felt. i like honesty in a writer. it shows integrity.

Post 4 by kyle1217 (Generic Zoner) on Tuesday, 10-Jan-2006 18:44:39

Very nice slightly disterbing but aren't we all? Very nice

Post 5 by kyle1217 (Generic Zoner) on Tuesday, 10-Jan-2006 18:45:14

Very nice slightly disterbing but aren't we all? Very nice

Post 6 by Inesle1987 (Account disabled) on Friday, 13-Jan-2006 14:30:02

Oh wow, very dark but still sweet. I like it.